IELTS Writing Task 1 Model Essay Prepared by Netto for Camford Academy
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 QUESTION NO:3 (charts for reasons for study and employers' support)
Both the charts depict the factors for study for various age group students and the various amount of support given to them by employers. Overall, the younger the students are, the more they study for career and the youngest of all age group students draw ardent support from employers as well.
As for the reasons for study, while the young studies for career, the elder does it for interest. 80% under 26 study for career followed by 26-29 age group with just below 10% less than the former while 30-39 age group and 40-49 category students are in the third and fourth positions with 56% and 40% respectively. Those over 49 (nearly 18%) are the fewest interested about career. In contrast, a staggering 70% of over 49 cram for interest followed by 40-49 with 30% less than the former. While the least percentage of the youngest (10%) carries out study for interest, those between 30-39 and 26-29 are in the third and fourth position with about 24% and 15% respectively.
Similarly, in terms of employers’ support, the youngest receives the highest support with financial help and time off from work that is nearly 65% of under 26 get employers’ assistance with 26-29 drawing about 15% less than the former while the age group over49 and 40-49 fall in the third and fourth favourite list with about 44% and 36% respectively. However, the fewest between 30 and 39(about 34%) find support from employers.
On the whole, the youngest approaches education for vocation and the eldest for interest with the former getting the soundest support from employers.
QUESTION NO:2
ANSWER (Prepared by Netto for Camford Academy, Trivandrum)
The given table shows the various amount of carbon dioxide emitted by four different countries – China, Brazil, Germany and Luxemberg. Overall, the largest countries such as China and Brazil emit more amount of Carbon dioxide than the smaller ones.
With reference to the emitted carbon dioxide, China leads the table with the highest of 7219 million tones followed by Brazil (1014 million tonnes) with almost six times less than the former. Despite Germany being a developed nation, it is only in the third position with 37 milloion tones less than Brazil whereas Luxemburg being the smallest nation has least amount of emission of 11 million tones.perce
In terms of total world carbon dioxide emission, China (19.1%), as expected, leads it with nearly one fifth of total world emissions. Whereas, both Brazil and Germany are in the second and third position with 2.7% and 2.6% respectively with Luxemburg in the fourth position contributing the least amount of 2%.
As for per capita tones of Carbon dioxide, a Luxembourgian leads the table with the highest emission of 22.4 tonnes followed by a German with 11.7 tonnes less than the former. A Chinese being in the third position has only 4.6 tonnes which is 2.8 tonnes more than a Brazilian, the least contributor.
As regards the rate of change in carbon dioxide emission, every countries except Germany has a positive growth. China has the most visible growth of 172.6% of carbon dioxide emission with Brazil in the second position with just below half of the former(79.8%). Whereas, Luxemburg has a slender change of 2.5% .Interestingly, only Germany has negative growth of 16%.
On the whole, the rate of carbon dioxide emission is directly proportionate to the size of the population of a country, that is, China being the mostly populated nation has the highest rate Co2 and Luxemburg being the smallest one has the least amount of it. Essay Prepared by Netto for Camford Academy
Essay Prepared by Netto for Camford Academy
QUESTION 1. (IETLS WRITING TASK1 MODEL ESSAYS)
Answer (Prepared by Netto for Camford Academy)
The first graph illustrates the percentage of smokers in USA, Japan and Holland, and the second the amount of alcohol consumption in Turkey, Holland and USA. Overall, the trend of smoking declined considerably over the four decades between 1960 and 2000 and that of alcohol consumption rising in the first two decades and then falling in the last two decades.
In terms of smoking, Holland started from the peak with below 60% of its total population smoking in 1960 maintaining it till 1970 followed by a sharp decline of just over 12% in the next decade(1980).It further dropped steadily to its lowest below 40% in the last two decades . In contrast, Japan had the second highest smokers which are 10% less than Holland in the initial year. Subsequently, it kept steadily falling over the next four decades to its lowest leveling to that of Holland in 2000.In comparison , USA started with the least percentage of smokers in 1960 with nearly one third of what Holland had in the initial year . It also kept falling over the span of 40 years hitting the rock bottom with the lowest figure of just below half of it in 1960.
In terms of alcohol consumption , Americans topped the graph with nearly staggering 8 liters per person in 1960, which considerably increased over the next two decades and subsequently falling to the second highest consumption of all three countries in 2000. Despite Holland having the second highest intake of liquor per person with nearly half of USA in the initial period , it rocketed to the peak tripling with 11 liters per person in 1980. Even though it fell marginally in the next decade , it remained to its highest intake towards the end of the decade . In contrast, the intake of a Turk with about 1 liter continued to be at the bottom with a slender increase in between throughout the span of 40 years.
On the whole, as a result of people becoming health conscious, the trend of both smoking and consuming liquor dropped towards the end of four decades.